This story, albeit very short, was written again in a creative writing workshop (big surprise!!). The assignment was to write in third person limited, and I struggled with it and secretly cussed out my instructor several times. And I also think I re-wrote this story about fifty times before I turned it in. My instructor gave me great constructive criticism and I finished it and started sending it out to journals all over. This one was picked up around Christmas time (seeing a trend here?). Thank you Santa.
http://www.freedomfiction.com/2015/01/a-new-driver-by-kimberly-fore/